I Call a rap battle!!

Okay so create a poem\rap for the person above you!!


I bet you guys can do better than Wayne


Wow visa and jrue.
You surprised me visa. Lol why don't you guys gimme a day to create one lol


Haha wcb lol! I never knew you guys knew how to rap

We already have one...I think...

She be hatin on wayne like osama hate planes,needa stop hatin cuz its a damn shame,tryna give wayne,all da damn blame,yo, she can be nice but be cussin like a saila,i dun relly like it so she on my radar,I keep money but koolish kinda doubts it put the money in my pocket den i spout it, you gotta realize lupe aint good and you gotta realize you aint from tha hood,Wayne is da one ta beat ,but lupes album flip flopped like sandals to feet

Yes I'm from Tampa,
no I'm not a bucanneer,
but I'll be bucking near
your main arteries you fuckin' queer!
The sun is here Cover your eyes
All my attributes is dangerous
My moustache is murderous
My hipbone'll send your clique home with they ribs blown back and they wigs sewn to they six pack
Cartilage in a gift wrap
My cartridges click clack
And leave you and your bitch clapped
Now ya bitch ass need a neck brace with a chin strap
We swing machetes at crews with little ice picks and niggas round my way call me the cuban missile crisis

PEACE!

Wayne is not as bad a free-styler as you tryna say
With a little more effort he could be the best rapper today
This new game takes effort too
But what Koolish has made is really cool
Koolish is a huge Kings and Lupe fan
She thinks rookie Tyreke Evans is a straight up man
She stick with Sac even with their win drought
Kevin Martin plus a bat equals him freaking out

Visa's verse is all jumbled together
sounds like somthin that came outta Soulja Boi's mouth
When you get comparisons like that
You know your rap game is goin south
I'm not really sure what he was tryna say
It seems like its gonna stay that way
Something about gettin pay???
Not to be offensive, but that verse was gay

Ryan, stop...

You just made me cry; seriously...

Jaleesa, don't cry, its a simple verse
Its not as if Visa has been cursed
I was just trying to be funny,
Not trying to make tears
Visa can get back on top
If he works hard for few years

You made me cry of laughter, that is.

the dynamic is gigantic despite panic i lie in a white hammock and write like a light xanax bite of a slight manic depressing the lights damage i strike with the left brain despite that i'm right-handed and i fight gammed the lights of a triban and the lives of the same type of spite that got christ branded god damn it what kind of shit is he on i could tell a busta by the structure of his genome you see i speak on a whole other level i expose the tail and rip the horns from the devil of course i'm a rebel shit more-so than ever my cores flow will sever your whole torso whenever i'm the mutha-fuckin problem feeder and if that nigga"s the best then i'm a goblin eater yo aspirations will make you an apparition yo lack of a occupations will have you in lacerations you whack facing and you acting in fact i'm waiting to strap you inside the strap and slap you with affirmation pussy nigga don't be trippin' with a psycho i will have yo pussy drippin blood like a psycho and i know i can only get so far plus i'm from the bay so i'm stuck below those bars and i know you think we all flow below par but you gotta admit that i'm the sickest nigga so far hold on where the fuck did you come from please don't stick me in a box with these dum-dums umm and it's not just fear shit there's whack niggaz everywhere not just here and it's not just queers no problem YOUR A FAGGOT i'm just saying what everybody's thinkin anyway, anyway you should laugh about it see i take what i feel then i rap about it i'm like jackson problem paintin acts of violence with an axis polished through a rapper's knowledge and in fact i promise if i'm strapped for knowledge no matter what i ain't ever going to college fuck em tuck em in the ground no hesitation i don't need a dire cell version of education my sedation is war my medication is metaphor when i spit niggaz often beg for more i'm not a whore i understand the lessons more lyrically tested bore bore your flesh n more take you from the low press it in like a dresser drawer this is what you call hip-hop in it's rarest form

Visa, the boy who needs to go to school
thinnks he knows the rules
he wants to get in the NBA
why don't you try getting a MBA
chances of you gettin in is one out of a million
but with an education you can think like a trillion
don't get yourself in trouble
if you live in the ghetto chances of you in the prison is double

Sorry
:l I suck at rapping

chances are 1 in 3000 BTW, good job koolish

Only thing I picked up from that verse is "YOUR A FAGGOT"
Doesn't mean nothing now that I'm looking back it
Improper grammar has rendered it useless
And the truth is that it is "you are" not "your"
But apparently after that verse you have come back looking for more
Of exactly what I dished out this past time
Hopefully you will learn and this will be your last time
I don't want to have lash out with any more painful rhymes
Your entire verse is random words jumbled together
Looking to find a meaning that just isn't there
So I suggest that you stop with this lame shit and become a little more aware

FAIL!

I call a rap battle between
Visa and WCB!

I <3 Noah! wrote:

Okay so create a poem\rap for the person above you!!


I bet you guys can do better than Wayne


Wow visa and jrue.
You surprised me visa. Lol why don't you guys gimme a day to create one lol


Haha wcb lol! I never knew you guys knew how to rap

Im a freestyle battler..what can i say?

I <3 Noah! wrote:

I call a rap battle between
Visa and WCB!

I need better compition,sorry

Are you gonna take that wcb?? Lol hahha

VISA wrote:

FAIL!

Wouldn't it be more appropriate to label yourself?
Considering the fact that you took that verse from someone else.
That's wack, that's lame, there's a hundred words for it
One word is isn't is original, so I'm going to ignore it
When you have your own lines and aren't "borrowing" from other MCs,
Let me know I'll tell you when you can get up off your knees
Because as of now you'd best bow down
Its as if you thought you could walk away with a crown
But it don't matter now, you've got nothing
Stop stealing shit Locksmith

damnit!

Im not a rapper,im a basketball player! And I can rap, I just can't rap like at someone, I can rap about things though.

Visa have you been stealing lines
first you gotta pay the fines
what is the point if your gonna copy
it just makes this game sloppy
don't be a rule breaker
don't be a rap faker

WIN!

Visa :SMH:
you disappointed me?

time for my fail rap......


I can't snap ma fingers
I can't tie my shoe
I dunno how to whistle
But im still betta than u