Can Someone Help Me With a Haikou?

Subject: Can Someone Help Me With a Haikou? Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:31 pm

So far I got :

Swift, and elegant
Gently soaring in the air

- The last line needs a sentance with 5 syllables... Could anyone help me making a line? And could you also help me make another haikou?/

I need to make two, and got 1/2 done...

The first line needs 5 syllables
The second line is 7 syllables
The Last Line is 5 syllables, and thats it.

Subject: Re: Can Someone Help Me With a Haikou? Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:33 pm

whats haikuo mean?

Subject: Re: Can Someone Help Me With a Haikou? Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:34 pm

It's a poem.

Subject: Re: Can Someone Help Me With a Haikou? Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:43 pm

Kiss my darreyare.
5 sylables.

Very Happy